The Why

My younger son and I, reading MY TRUCK IS STUCK to his class

It can be easy to forget why we do this work, what with deadlines and doubts and all of the things we do in our own little writerly vacuums. The good news: All it takes is reading a book to a class of eager young readers to remember the why.

An Illustrated Guide to #MyWritingProcess

Thanks to the lovely Miss Louise Galveston (whose hilarious gross-out book BY THE GRACE OF TODD is not to be missed), I doodled something for you guys. Here’s my writing process, in one complicated, annotated, illustrated nutshell:

As you can see, a lot goes on inside my head. If you’d like to read more about my process (which I love to gab about), check out these posts on outlining and revision. You can also find a TON of awesome writing posts from other authors on Le Twitter, under the hashtag #MyWritingProcess.

Right now, I’m working on revisions for my debut novel, Counting Thyme, as well as drafting my second MG book and a YA contemporary about a boy who believes love is a delusion. I’m drawn to all kinds of stories (especially fantasy, which I grew up reading!), but contemporary characters (and families) are the ones who give me all the feels. There’s nothing quite like entering another person’s world. Which, come to think of it, is I why I both read and write. Books are the bomb!

Now, let me introduce you to three fellow writers, who are each so awesome, it’s barely acceptable to tag them all in the same post. They’ll share their process next Monday, May 5th!

There are some books you covet so much you can taste it. That’s how I feel about Becky. I mean, her book. No, seriously. SIMON sounds like exactly the kind of endearing, unapologetically intelligent story that I love to read!

Becky Albertalli is a child psychologist turned YA writer who lives in the not cool part of Atlanta with her husband, son, dog, and cat. Her debut, SIMON VS. THE HOMO SAPIENS AGENDA, will be released in March of 2015 by Balzer + Bray/HarperCollins. Becky is represented by Brooks Sherman of The Bent Agency. Blog | GoodReads | Twitter

When it comes to heart and family, my good friend Ronni Arno is matchless, so I can’t wait to read her MG debut about a girl who hides her family’s celebrity status from her friends at boarding school.

Ronni’s debut novel, RENEE REINVENTED, publishes with Simon & Schuster/Aladdin in Fall 2015. Ronni stalks her kids and their friends for story ideas, kayaks, and eats chocolate…not usually at the same time. Ronni is rep’d by Sarah Davies of The Greenhouse Literary Agency. Blog | GoodReads | Twitter

When I read MY 7TH GRADE LIFE IN TIGHTS, I couldn’t believe how freaking funny it was–laugh out loud lines on every page! I may have wanted to smack Brooks (just a little), but really, I’m very happy for him (ie: unreasonably jealous).

Brooks Benjamin is a MG writer, filmmaker, teacher, husband, SCBWI member, and father to a 75-pound demented German Shepherd mix named LeeLoo. Represented by the fantabulous Uwe Stender of TriadaUS Literary. Blog | GoodReads | Twitter

A Shot of Inspiration

I was reminded of this poem today, when my critique partners and I were discussing words of inspiration. A poem titled “in Defeat” may not sound very inspiring on first glance, but ever since I read this in eighth grade for an English assignment, I’ve loved every word. It’s one of the very few poems I have memorized. I keep a copy of it hanging on my wall. Today, I share it with you:


in Defeat

Defeat may serve as well as victory

To shake the soul and let the glory out.

When the great oak is straining in the wind,

The boughs drink in new beauty, and the trunk

Sends down a deeper root on the windward side.

Only the soul that knows the mighty grief

Can know the mighty rapture. Sorrows come

To stretch out spaces in the heart for joy.

— Edwin Markham.






Save. Your. Energy.

There’s this concept that one of my yoga teachers talks about: the idea of saving your energy. What I mean by that is, you know that moment, right after everyone in yoga does a partner exercise, and a burst of chatter and laughter takes over the room? Or, if not yoga, perhaps the moment right after you finish a run, or a swim, or any other kind of physical challenge? That moment is pure energy.

Seriously. In my yoga class, our teacher often has to ring a bell to get our attention after one of these energy-blasting moments. That’s how jazzed we all feel. Smiling. Chatting. Being loud as heck. Basically, we revert to being a class full of wild child three year olds for about 3 minutes, until our teacher reminds us to SAVE OUR ENERGY.

At the moment you accomplish something (often a physical effort), your brain releases a rush of happy chemicals. You feel INCREDIBLE. You’re instantaneously more extroverted and ready to gab. You can feel the energy rush through your limbs like electricity.

You have a choice then: either let all that energy out by some means of release…OR, hold it inside, like a hot little ball of inferno, fully charged and ready to explode.

Of course, saving your energy is not easy. But if you can hold onto that energized feeling and direct it inwards, you can use that energy for another challenge. In yoga, I hold onto my energy by staying silent and focused. Then my next arm balance or handstand is so much easier, because I have that charge stored up in my muscles, ready to go.

The same principle applies to creative energy. You know that moment when you have a creative breakthrough, and you want to hop on twitter and gab gab gab? Or message a friend? Or text someone? Next time, try resisting that urge. Hold onto your energy. Feel the pressure of it in your chest, filling you up. Stay focused, and move forward with your work. You will delve deeper. You will roll through to another eureka. Or in the very least, the next challenge you face will be that much easier.

Save your energy, friends. Put it to work for YOU. Happy writing, all!

Beta Reading Makes Good Writers!

I babbled on about beta readers on Twitter today, and decided to put it all here for easy reference:

 

Happy Holidays! (With a Gift for You)

Happy Holidays! If you don’t subscribe to the posts over at Writer Unboxed, give your self a gift this year and DO IT. People like Don Maass and Robin LaFevers share some of the best posts on writing craft I’ve ever read, and wonderful illustrators like Debbie Ohi provide a healthy dose of humor like this:

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If you’re like, WAIT I THOUGHT THERE WAS A GIFT FOR ME…then, yes of course there’s more! In the spirit of giving this holiday, and in celebration of turning in my revision, I’m looking forward to spend some time reading over the holiday. So, I’m thrilled to provide a first chapter critique (MG or YA only), which you can enter to win by emailing me at [redacted] by MIDNIGHT on Dec 23rd.  Please send your name, title, category, genre, and query if you have one. I will provide feedback on all queries I receive, and will contact you for the pages if you win the full critique.

If I’m feeling crazy, who knows, there may be more than one winner! Please note that I make both in-line edits as well as review comments directly on WORD docs, so please be prepared to provide your work in that format.

Happy Writing to All, and to All a Good Write!

🙂

Using an Outline to Revise

I’ve been deep, deep, deeeeep in the revision cave for the last several weeks (and I’m headed back in again NOW), but I wanted to take a quick minute to share something I learned about revision. I’ve revised plenty in the past–altered settings, changed characters, improved world-building, etc—but I had not really undertaken a major revision, ie: making big time plot changes.

If you’re at all like me, the idea of making a huge change to a well-woven story induces no small measure of panic, but I decided to try something new this time around to help me get through the work. Because of my days in the product design world, I’m super process-oriented. I have complete faith that if I just follow a process step-by-step, I will eventually make it through to a conclusion.

The conclusion, in this case, was switching out one major plot line for another. Now, I’d done the creative work–I had a seed of an idea about the new direction I wanted in my story, but the substitution was not a clean apples for apples swap. I needed to remove one complex storyline and inject a completely new one.

The big question: where to start?

I looked to process for an answer, and realized that before I could even theorize on changes, I needed to have a solid understanding of the story as it was. Enter the outline.

My outline is the paper divided into 3 columns right below the keyboard.

Now, I’d made plenty of outlines in the past, but this time I needed something different: I wanted space to record what was currently in the MS, and also space to add ideas about changes. So my paper-based method was to divide pages into three columns, and title each column with the chapter number and name, leaving a long, empty column of space below.

Then I went through the manuscript. As I went, I noted the scene setting at the top of the page, and jotted a very short list of the key plot points in each chapter. If there was a scene break, I drew a line, noted the new scene setting, and again recorded plot points. I made sure to limit myself to JUST the key emotion, action, and mystery plot points.

As I completed this first pass, I also took the opportunity to make wild guesses about the changes I would make–but not on the paper. On POST-ITS, my most favorite revision tool ever. Post-it’s give me the freedom to guess at anything, or even just leave myself a series of questions (often, those questions are super key to finding the answers on a later pass). You can see the post-it’s in the picture above; I stuck them right below my plot point notes.

I try not to dwell on this first outline pass–the goal is to accurately note the current MS structure and capture all of my random ideas and thoughts. After this pass is done, I start over from the beginning, and this time, I really read the MS and attempt to make decisions. I take the chapters one at a time, referring to the outline as I go to keep up with what’s happening overall. Slowly, my post-its that are covered in questions end up covered in solutions. Once I have a decision, I write changes directly on the paper copy of the MS–but if I’m not sure yet, I just stick with the post-its. They can always change later.

This pass takes a tremendous amount of will power and time to get through. John Cleese says that we have to build up a tolerance for solving problems, and I agree with him. Revision is never easy, but the outline really helped me keep track of the things I needed to change while keeping up with the many things I wanted to keep. The final step for me is typing my edits into the computer–which gives me another opportunity to fine tune the writing–and then my round of revision is complete.

What’s fascinating about revision is that it’s a different process every time. Sometimes your changes need to be executed front to back, because they encompass the whole story arc, and other times they need to be addressed in layers. However I revise in the future, I know that the outline will continue to play a role in my process. If anything, an outline gives you a free place to start, a place where you do not have to make decisions quite yet–and sometimes that’s exactly what you need to get a challenging revision underway.

It’s Okay to Ask for Drugs

So, you’ve probably heard someone say that writing a book is like giving birth. I’m about to give you a really concrete example of how that’s painfully true. As in, PAINFULLY true.

For those of you who have been in labor before, you’ll likely recall the moments when your brain screamed I CANNOT DO THIS ANYMORE UNDER ANY CIRCUMSTANCES! For those of you who haven’t been in labor, trust me–you reach a point where the pain is so great that you can’t breathe, and you need to vomit, and you might pass out, and you would give absolutely anything to make it stop. Usually, that moment comes right before you find relief, whether that be in the form of birth or drugs. The feeling is similar to other moments in life involving great physical pain and change.

I went into labor intending not to have drugs. The first time, that didn’t work out. The second time, I somehow, miraculously, made it through natural childbrith (side note: there is nothing natural about childbirth. It’s foreign, and terrifying, and only happens for a split second in your life, so how can it feel commonplace? It may be designed by nature, but it’s not natural).

While there are many reasons as to why the two births differed, there was one detail that made a big difference for me the second time around. Prior to our son’s birth, my husband and I had made a deal: I could ask for drugs all I wanted. That’s right, I begged and pleaded for an epidural with every gasp. I cried. I offered my firstborn in trade. But no matter what I said or did, it was up to my husband to know when I really needed them.

As in, I begged for drugs, and no one listened to me. The midwife was down with this plan. The nurses, to be honest, were a little freaked out. But I tell you what, there was nothing like the freedom of ASKING. It was okay to ask for the drugs. It was okay to “give up.” It was okay to let everything fall away.

Years later, I find myself facing a very similar moment as I face revisions on my second MG novel. I’m in pain. The moment sucks. I don’t know how to get through it. I hate everything. I don’t know if I can do it. And every single cell in my body is screaming to GIVE UP. To ask for the drugs. So I’m doing it. And my wonderful, awesome husband is happy to listen to me tell him all of the reasons I’m giving up. All of the silly rationalizations. He’s smiling, nodding, agreeing–and not giving me the drugs.

We grow up believing that it is wrong to give up, that it’s some kind of mortal sin. But honestly, we never know what’s on the other side of giving up. With writing, letting go could lead to a subconscious breakthrough. One day, you give up. You go back to your life, your kids, keeping up with the laundry and cooking for a change–and a week later, you wake up with a spark in your chest. Just as with labor, the darkest moments are right before the light. At least, that’s what I’m hoping.

So today, I’m giving you permission to give up. To let go. Because you’re a writer, and sometimes you have to let the words go before they can find their way back to you.

Happy Thoughts

Some thoughts that resonated with me lately!

Punctuation is a fabulous tool for controlling your reader–you even get to control where they breathe. That’s what I call power!

— Nicola Morgan (as posted on Ingrid’s Notes)


Anonymous asked: What would you tell a teenage girl who’s feeling a little/lot down because boys she’s interested in never reciprocate because she is too weird/quiet/intimidating/undesirable? I’ve been in this predicament my whole life, even though I’ve gotten over my ‘awkward stage’, and lately it’s gotten disappointing and depressing. I’m in need of some advice, or at least a pick-me-up, and you seem like a good person to go to.

1. Teen boys are having issues of their own and are sometimes too busy thinking about those/ figuring out their lives/ feeling secretly inadequate/ feeling pretty much how you are feeling to actually notice if you are interested in them. Actually, scratch the teen part. Actually, scratch the boy part. Humans are all having issues and are often secretly suspicious that the world finds them weird or ugly or stupid or awkward. IT’S NOT JUST YOU.

— Maggie Stiefvater (as posted on her tumblr, go there to read her full response!)

“It is human nature to concoct explanations to fill the great void of the unknown.”

“People are always so much braver, so much nobler, than I ever imagine.”

–Rae Carson, The Bitter Kingdom

What Makes a Great Scifi Story?

I’ve seen a couple of scifi films lately that really got me thinking about the key to great stories–scifi stories, specifically. How do scifi stories differ from other genres? What’s the key to telling a great story? And how can we improve our stories so that they connect with the audience?

Well, first of all, scifi covers a very broad spectrum of story types. According to Wiki:

Science fiction is a genre of fiction dealing with imaginative content such as futuristic settings, futuristic science and technology, space travel, parallel universes, extraterrestrial life, and paranormal abilities. Exploring the consequences of scientific innovations is one purpose of science fiction, making it a “literature of ideas”.[1] Science fiction has been used by authors as a device to discuss philosophical ideas such as identity, desire, morality, and social structure.

For me, scifi is about possibilities. What may happen, and what that might mean for us, as humans, as keepers of the earth, and as patrons of the universe. Scifi usually presents the audience with not only a new character, but a whole new world to digest. World-building is a critical element for scifi stories: without it, the world falls flat, but with too much of it, the story drowns.

For me, the key to telling a great scifi story is telling the STORY. Not telling about the WORLD. Take, for example, two recent scifi films, Oblivion and Elysium. Both offered far future Earths with starkly different worlds from our modern one. Both offered characters facing adversity within their world. But neither, in my opinion, provided a story that the audience really cared about. The question is, why?

In my humble opinion, each of these films tried to tell too many layers of story at once. They attempted to present both a big picture story as well as an interpersonal story, leaving the audience with little focus and not much connection. By contrast, films like The Matrix showed us a close-in view of a personal story in the first film, allowing us to peel back the layers of a brand new world slowly, in the context of personal struggle. This allows us to bond with the characters on a very deep level. The world is a backdrop. The character is the story.

Think about your story–what is your character’s perception of the world at the beginning? How does that perception change? How does their view of the world broaden? Bringing your audience in at eye level and slowly expanding the character’s world view is a great way to get us invested in both your character AND the world. Dumping a lot of information about your world keeps us from bonding with your character AND drains the world-level issues of their power.

Now, some stories work as trilogies, like The Matrix. But not all of us can plan to write three books. Sometimes you have to get it all done in one story. The Fifth Element is a fantastic example of scifi story that works on all story levels. The key, again, is progression. We open with a starkly different world, but what’s important is what’s happening to the characters in that world. Only as the characters discover the big picture story do we as the audience come to see it. We take the journey with them. That way, we care about them most, and secondarily their cause becomes our cause–by the end, we care about their world, too.

While I don’t write scifi (much), it remains one of my favorite genres to read and watch on film. As with every genre, it’s difficult to get scifi just right. Show me your incredible new world. Take me on an amazing adventure. Do it all through the lens of your character, and I will love them as well as your world.